Wednesday, September 26, 2007

Descriptive Lead: Save Me From Myself

Grey. Gloomy grey. Gruesome, gloomy grey. The colour of mucky, boring clothing that people work out in. Grey. The colour of imbalance and uncertainty. There is no shock that my life mirrors the colour. That is the colour that I am constantly surrounded by. My workplace, where I spend 6 days a week, and work 10 hour shifts. My car, which is a grey oldsmobile. My apartment, which is so dull. Dull and grey. All I ever think about is living in the suburbs, with a family, a dog, and the all American lifestyle, rather than working 10 hour shifts at the Ford assembly line, installing brake pads, after brake pads, after brake pads. So inturn, this is my escape. My utopia. This is where I kill all the monotony.

11 comments:

Laydee_J said...

Very boring.

VERY boring, in a good way. Lol. The gloomy grey vibe is shoutin' from your prose. It's good.

Alena said...

wonderfulllllllll. i'm proud of my bessie.

MC said...

lots of grey...

Jasmine said...

Its nice. let me rephrase that. Well done Deeqa.

Ms.Madame Fantasmia said...

I like it ...sounds great...but now I feel different 'bout the colour grey.

FluκεY т y я o said...

reading this....makes me rather gloomy! if you touch a person with your writing....you are better then good!

Moby Dick said...

Oooo. It makes me wanna find out where this "place" is that the guy goes to kill the monotony.

funkie said...

i like

reconstruction site said...

i like how you write. wheres your poem? i wanted to comment on it. it was very very good.

Jasmine said...

How can a lifetyle so boring, be so interesting?

bton said...

very grey... i like it.